in these types of stories are so damn stupid. They always let their rivals live for another day because they want them to "truly suffer" like they themselves did.

Not once. NOT. ONCE. Have these idiots ever realized by leaving these walking underwear skid stains alive they not only quadrupled their problems in the future but they are endangering their loved ones as well. I'm going to make a prediction that, 100%, this rival will now attack FML's family. Guaranteed.

Yes, yes, I'm aware that 100% of the time the rival has already attacked her family in these stories, I know, but this time it'll truly be "devastating". 50% chance of someone close to the FML dying permanently or being crippled for real this time. No magical, random bullshit, ass-pull elixir to fix them ever again.

For once I want to read a story where the FMC is like, "Bitch. Die." within the first 10 chapters. And BOOM bitch really is dead.

UPDATE: OH. LOOK. She immediately killed her crush's

brother. This brother has the same dynamic with her crush as her rival does with her. So, she's willing to fuck up someone else's revenge but won't let anyone interfere with hers? Ugh. 🙄😒

This story is weirdly paced. It's very fast and abrupt where it shouldn't be,

like how she became the head of her family. Somehow her school's master has the authority to declare she CAN be the master?! I mean, she already won by brute force because a dumb-ass elder declared only the strong can lead the family. So, she promptly beat her uncle at an official, semi-public, open-to-family-only arena.

Besides the school master is not blood related to her! He's not appointed by the Emperor or anyone of any authority outside of the school system! What rights or authority does he have in her family? I'm so confused.

And then...and then

she's not even out of the arena but the schoolmaster demands her help, turning her into a supernatural detective?!

Next thing we know she's looking for some kind of "vampire" who sucks kids into dried, withered husks.🙄😒

There's no transition in between, it happened in about 2 chapters. One moment she's fighting to protect her father and the next she's a detective. What the hell.

I'm done. I gave it 68 chapters to improve but it hasn't.