As I have mentioned before Hayakawa Nijiko is Love. Even in these partially inked rough sketches Hayakawa is able to maintain her characteristic style with dialogues, framing, and having just the right pace for the story; not too slow, nor too fast.

Hayawaka Nojiko-sensei never fails me and this time is no exception. I just love her works so much, they exude the same gentle and subtle vibe while each one as its own distinct essence to distinguish from one another, which means you would never get bored with her stories, despite how mild they seem. I mean I'm dying to see some real actions between the boys, but if sensei decides to stick with shounen-ai forever I wouldn't mind too much. I might mourn over how wasteful it is (in my mind she's actually got very decent love scenes, with that scrumptious art accompanied by the sexual tension and all), but in the end I'll continue to her no matter what.

That pretty much says it. It's another nice and simple work that expands on some of her characters. There isn't any plot, it's more like an afterword warping up some things and expanding the conclusion of several characters. Obviously, you need to read her previous works INCLUDING her previous doujinshi to understand the whole thing. No idea why it's rated so poorly.