There're lot of stupid things in this manga I won't recount as they're nothing unusual in yaoi. I'll just describe what struck me as the most illogical thing. It was

seme-san being given a task to train uke-kun for (in three months) event, wasting most of time on making uke-kun mangaka assistant, then throwing him away onto some other guy to train. And all of that after "you have no motivation for work" rants. Plus, so called "professional" used uke-kun as a drawing model for hentai under the pretense of training, and sexually harassed him in process. And called him a pervert right after.. I mean, come on! That's too much bullsh*t for one manga.

This story would make a helluva lot more sense if we had the original series scanned or licensed, but nothing has been done to work on the Doujin story so we are left wondering who the hell are these people and why should we care about them. Or even how they know each other and their past interactions.

Other than a perpetual feeling of being lost and missing out on the story, it's good.

The characters are rushed as well as the story. There is no real development, things kind of just happens which just makes the story badly told. Not like there even is much to the storyline. I can't say that I especially like this, but it's not all bad. It's just that the quality isn't high, but unlike a lot of works this is still enjoyable in some way.

This is from the mangaka of Nar Kiss? Really? The art and plotline are both superior, and the story is actually compelling. The characters are more likeable, as well as more believable (though to actually describe them as believable is still a huge stretch.)